Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Cutting onions


Like every other day,
she is cutting onions
at the kitchen counter.
The Bombay onions
of pinkish purpley hue.
Her practised hand
working the knife like a stern goddess.
A heap of discarded onion beards
on one side of the chopping board,
a baiypolhi of unpeeled onions on the other,
their dry papery skin half peeling
to reveal the firm layers of the bulb underneath.
Her eyes focused,
she stands slicing translucent perfect half moons
with the finesse of an accomplished cook.
She is always cutting onions -
this essential ingredient that makes us all cry,
yet remains the throb of the kitchen’s heart.
I wonder if the constant onion cutting
is her mask for covering up
her heartaches,
blaming her onions for the constant tears
than run down her face.
Tears streaming down her face
she continues cutting her onions.


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16 comments:

Jennifer Richardson said...

oh what a beautiful story
...a beautiful way to look
and listen to a pile of
lovely onions.
I loved this.....thanks.
-Jennifer

Naturally Carol said...

Hi Kamana..cutting up onions is a good place to hide the real tears! My friend used to say that her husband loved dinner to be cooking as he came home from work..many years ago..so she used to cut up onions and have them frying when she heard his car..and he would always smell them and think dinner was cooking.

Karen said...

Beautiful writing!...

PaperPumpkin said...

I hope you have no (real) sad tears on your birthday...

poemblaze said...

I love the roots being called onion beards!

Ushnish Ghosh said...

Very nice Kamana

lisa said...

So sad, yet so very beautiful Kamana. Nicely done.

Brian Miller said...

you know if that is what it takes to get them out, the onions are worth the tears...touching write...

mrs mediocrity said...

so poignant and beautiful, yes, at times, there must be onions.

Andy said...

WoW! A very touching write.

Nicely done!

Dorian Susan said...

Ok that's it! I don't stop by this blog nearly enough. Each time I do, I'm blown away. I think it's the title..."Journaling thru Photographs."-your images are beautiful, but your words make the whole post a complete work of art. I like this onion story-and true we all cry with onions, tho' I try hard not to-with onions or anything. Perhaps onions would offer the perfect excuse.
A tried tip....a scuba mask sometimes will limit the tears if you're trying to avoid them.

Chesney said...

You have me in tears thinking about it lol Great textures and such realistic colors!

Connie Smiley said...

What poignant and lyrical poetry! And a beautiful image of the onions.

ayala said...

Touching and beautiful...

Amy said...

This is so amazing. A poignant portrait told so simply and elegantly. I can picture everything perfectly.

Shashi said...

A lovely verse.. and so emotional... and evocative...

Shashi
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