Saturday, August 28, 2010

A darker shade than black


the moonless starless night
beckons me into its darkness
that is a darker shade than black
pushing aside
the caressing arms
of kissing trees
i leave the comfort of my home
in search of you

somewhere far away
i hear you
call my name
i see you

but you are not you
your eyes no longer
light up when you smile
your mouth a shadow within shadows
your feet barely touch the ground

you whisper my name
and fade into the darkness
i follow you

12 comments:

Sarah said...

Very dark, but beautiful all the same.

Char said...

i agree, dark and beautiful

RNSANE said...

Beautiful and sad, all at the same time, Kamana.

beth said...

ohhhhh.....i love the mystery in these words.....

PaperPumpkin said...

So sad...and so beautiful. Are you okay?

S. Etole said...

my heart hurts for you with this ...

sarah said...

I love this :-)

Leenie said...

Amazing words. Missing a loved one takes us to dark places.

Amy said...

"your mouth a shadow within shadows"... lovely, very evocative. This is a very intriguing and powerful poem.

Oliag said...

What a beautiful poem Kamana...

Claudie said...

how more painful could be sadness
without words to put on...
beautiful words,
link of words,
like Ariane's line,
to search hope,
to search him...

honey words for poorly heart...

Katy Noelle said...

woah! What beautiful and moody word photos!

Actually, intense enough that, maybe, I shouldn't comment but just let it linger and be....

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