
the moonless starless night
beckons me into its darkness
that is a darker shade than black
pushing aside
the caressing arms
of kissing trees
i leave the comfort of my home
in search of you
somewhere far away
i hear you
call my name
i see you
call my name
i see you
but you are not you
your eyes no longer
light up when you smile
your mouth a shadow within shadows
your feet barely touch the ground
your feet barely touch the ground
you whisper my name
and fade into the darkness
i follow you


12 comments:
Very dark, but beautiful all the same.
i agree, dark and beautiful
Beautiful and sad, all at the same time, Kamana.
ohhhhh.....i love the mystery in these words.....
So sad...and so beautiful. Are you okay?
my heart hurts for you with this ...
I love this :-)
Amazing words. Missing a loved one takes us to dark places.
"your mouth a shadow within shadows"... lovely, very evocative. This is a very intriguing and powerful poem.
What a beautiful poem Kamana...
how more painful could be sadness
without words to put on...
beautiful words,
link of words,
like Ariane's line,
to search hope,
to search him...
honey words for poorly heart...
woah! What beautiful and moody word photos!
Actually, intense enough that, maybe, I shouldn't comment but just let it linger and be....
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